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Right now it is just the original mix I'm going to edit this a lot before I release Enterstorm
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Posted 07 October 2014 - 06:28 PM
Just some constructive criticism.
In the beginning, the snare hits are way off beat and honestly don't make much sense with the piano in the timing. The piano throughout the song doesn't make much sense, as it is not in any key I believe exists, mostly sounds like random notes being hit. In the latter half of the minute, the beat actually makes sense and is on time and the bass-line suits it well. But the piano is still a big turnoff due to it being constantly off-key and rhythm.
You can look up some simple chord and key theory to help create a nicer piano line and a melody as well.
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Posted 07 October 2014 - 06:36 PM
yea it doesn't sound like the piano is playing in any keys, just random notes. Not bad for a first song tho. I'm looking at you BOTDF
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Posted 07 October 2014 - 07:20 PM
I just wanted to hear it but it says:
We are sorry - the song you want to hear seems to be broken.
Posted 12 October 2014 - 12:28 PM
Hm... I don't know JoJo, and thanks for the critisism I'll try to get it to sound better.
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